Here we can see the video-recordings with your briefing on the topic outlines of your future presentations in the order of presentations.
You have to see all the videos and follow the instructions below.
The JOMES Team
Heineken
Richar's Girls Team
The Butterfly Co. Team
The Dream Team
Javier's Team
The Business Area Team
All of you should have an individual blogger account, enter this blog with that account and make comments on the performance of at least three people from different teams other than yours. These comments should be done in this post.
Then, as a team, you should embed your own team's video into the teams' blog and should make comments on the performance of the team.
All comments in English, please.
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Hi Jesús!
ResponderEliminarI´m Jorge Rodríguez and my team is "The Dream Team"
These are my coments about some of the perfomances:
I like Javier´s perfomance because he has an added difficulty: he´s alone and, however, he looks very quiet and he even smiles when he finishes. However, he should not to read all he says in the next presentation as he does in this.
I want to emphasize the perfomance of Macu and Sonia. They speak wiht clear voice and this is very important
Finally, I want to speak about Gloria´s perfomance. I think that she should maintain her concentration when she is speaking and trying no to laugh becuase it´s a bad gesture althought it´s true that Richard doesn´t help her
Hi Jesús
ResponderEliminarI´m Manu Sánchez and my team is "Heineken"
I want to speak about Javi´s performance because I was astonished by his courage. He talked alone but he has a great cold blood for this situation.
I want to speak too about Isa´s performance and his group because they were the first. In this situation is very difficult talk because it is a unfamiliar experience.
Finally, I want to express my congratulations to Julio Pacheco for his performance, I think that he can get by in english but he fail with pronunciation of some words.
Jorge and Manu, thank you for your well-articulated and pondered comments, which are a clear indication of your observation and thinking skills, which are the best to learn, and we can learn a lot from others, can't we?
ResponderEliminarKeep up the good work!
Hi Jesus!
ResponderEliminarI'm Sergio Martín Corrales.
My comments are for:
Javier: In my opinion, he is very confident and his smile show a lot of confidence. He communicate very well, and he says interesting things about diet.
Joseph Portillo: He was a little nervous, but his ideas are goods. If he won a bit of confidence, he will make a good exposition.
Alvaro Santibañez: Although he was nervous (he touch his nose sometimes), his pronunciation is clear and precise, and he commmunicate really well.
My individual blogger account is http://corrales-sergio.blogspot.com/
Greetings!!
Hi Jesus!
ResponderEliminarMy name is Natalia Villa Martín and my group is Business area
This is my new individual direction :
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Hello Jesus , I am Natalia Villa
ResponderEliminarI speak to mistakes that I found in our speeches :
* Most used (expression ) :
Presentation : - In this topic…
- In our region …
* Most use(tenses ) :
-Present Continous :
Subject + going to + infinitive
- Future :
Subject + will + infinitive
* Mistakes ( Pronunciation ) :
- Talk ( whithout 2 )
- Place in place of places . (plural)
Mistake ( Grammar ) :
- there was hamburguers. (Were)
- there is many people. ( Are)
Hi Jesus.
ResponderEliminarI'm Arantxa Serrano González from Business Area and this is my individual direction:
http://arantxaserranogonzalez.blogspot.com/
My comments from three persons:
Julio (The Butterfly Company).
He was a little nervous, but he spoke a lot of time and he expressed well, although sometimes he failed the pronunciation.
Loli (The Dream Team).
She was nervous and therefore she was wrong in the pronunciation of some words.
Javier.
He transmited calmness, he wasn´t nervous. He spoke fluent.
Also, his topic of the work is very interesting.
In general, I think that we did well,knowing that we were nervous and it was the first time that we did this kind of works.
Bye!
Hello Jesús!!
ResponderEliminarThis is my commentary of three persons :
my first commentary is going to Rosana Rodriguez Melchor of the dream team ,i believe that she should to improve her pronunciation and get less nervous but for others her oration was good.
my second person is Alejandro from Heineken group.
In my opinion he is tense and he speaks mechanically about his theme, his pronunciation is quite good ,surely that his next exposition will better.
Finally i´m going to talk about Jose "Joseph" from The butterfly company team.
he have a good argument but he links sentences many times with the preposition "and",he speaks enough clear and follows good his scheme.
Hi Jesús!
ResponderEliminarI´m Lorena Rico Caballero. My team is `The Butterfly Company´.
My comments about three different people are:
In the first place: Rebeca. She belongs to the `Heineken´ group. I think she did very well her presentation because her pronunciation was good and she seemed relaxed. She spoke slow and seriously.
My next comment is about: Sara. She is a member of the `Richar´s girls´ team. She made the introduction in her team. She did a good presentation and she pronounced well. However, I think she became nervous and she needed to look some times her notes.
Finally: Sergio. He belongs to the `Businesss Area´ group. He spoke for a long time and he did it fluently and clearly. He seemed very relaxed. I think his presentation was very well.
Jose Maria Portillo
ResponderEliminarHe was very nervous but his spelling is good.
Ricardo Solis
He was very relaxed and he communicated very well
Javier Pajuelo
He explained good but he was alone and it is difficult
hello Jesus!! I´m Sara Muñoz Rubio and my group is The Richar´s Girls.
ResponderEliminarMy comment about three persons of the class are:
In first place Jose. He belong to the group "The Butterfly Company"
The topic of the work is The History in Extremadura.
In my opinion his pronunciation this good though the presentation is short.
In general he was good
In second place Loli. She belongs to the group "The Dream Team". The topic the work is the animal on the danger of extinction.
She was very nervous but his pronunciation was well...though is possible improve.
Was the firt time that she was speaking in public, is normal that she had nerves.
Finally, I will comment the presentation the Sonia. She the belong to the group "The Butterfly Company".
In my opinion was of the best presentation.
She wasn´t nervous.
This pronunciation is very good and she communicates enough information.
It´s an excellent presentation
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ResponderEliminarHello Jesus!
ResponderEliminarI am Ricardo Solis Rol, a member of Richar´s Girls and this is my favourable critique to 3 members of different groups.
I hope that I have valued good the presentations.
A greeting.
Alvaro Santibañez Saez.
He belongs to the group The Dream Team. He will treat in his work on the animals on the danger of extinction.
His pronunciation is enough good and though he is observed a bit nervously, he does it very well, speaks 1 minute approximately which for the order is enough good.
He uses expressions to connect topics, though he appeals to his summary often.
Sonia Ramos Tejero.
She belongs to the group The Butterfly Company. She will treat in her work about the history of Estremadura. She begins the presentation of her group, which is more complicated and though her contribution overcomes by little the half minute she does not have hardly any interruption.
Her pronunciation also is very acceptable.
Though we know that we can improve all, she does it in general good.
Javier.
He in his presentation does not appear with his group, he does it by separate.
His topic is the fast food.
It might say that his presentation is one of the best in the sense that he makes it alone and it can give to all " more fear " and this is to take into consideration.
He can improve his pronunciation and be less attentive of his summary since he reads it too often, but as we have said in spite of he exposing alone the topic he does it very acceptably.
Hi Jesus! I'm Montse Peña, my group is JOMES.
ResponderEliminarIn my opinion, Jorge, from the Dream Team, haves a very good pronuntiation.
In second place, Sara, in the Richard's Girls group, is very calm and her presentation was very clear.
Finish, Julio, from the Butterfly Company, transmitted to us very well the contents of his part.
Hi Jesus! I'm Sonia Ramos and my group is The Butterfly Company.
ResponderEliminarMy comments about three persons are:
- Ricardo Solís: He belongs to the group The Richar's Girls. I think his presentation is very good because his pronunciation is good and his explanation about his part of the work is very complete. Besides, he wasn't very nervous. In general, his presentation is good.
- Javier: Althoug he read a lot of time the paper, his presentation is very good because he wasn't nervous and he was able to transmit very well the things he want to say. Besides, I think his presentation was more difficult because he had to do it alone. He can improve things as pronunciation but he did it very well.
-Loli: I think that in general her presentation is good but she can improve thing. She was very nervous and she had to look to the paper many times but her pronunciation is good.
Hi jesus
ResponderEliminarI´m Carmen Pizarro Jimenez
I want to talk first about the performance of elisabeth, from the Jomes team, because her pronunciation is very good.And Montse, from the same group, has spoken very well.
Finally, I have to say that Javier, from my group, has defended alone the parts of the scheme of the work, and he has done it very well
Hello Jesus,I'm Rebeca Pérez from the Heineken team.My new and individual blog direction is http://rbcpp.blogspot.com/
ResponderEliminar7 de abril de 2009 12:03
Blogger Rebeca Pérez Pelayo dijo...
These are my comments about three differtent people from three different teams:
First,I'll comment something about Judith from Jomes team.
I think she makes the effor to have a good pronounciation and not to read,so I think this is really positive,but I think She speaks for a very short time.
Next person is Richar,from Richar's girls.
ResponderEliminarOn the one hand He's communicatyng most of the time,and He tries to explain himself correctly.
On the other hand I think his pronounciation is not completely correct.
In my opinion He`s done a great work.
My last comment is going to be about Lorena,from the Butterfly company.
ResponderEliminarIn my opnion She summarizes her main points very well and quite fluently.
It's a fact that She only uses her piece of paper as a guide,which was one of the most important things that we had to do.
I have chosen people that are trying to tell what they are going to do,because other people are reading a lot,and thats whty I prefer not to comment them.
Hi Jesús!! I´m Judith.
ResponderEliminarNow I´m going to talk about 3 people. They are Sonia, Pablo and Gloria.
First, I would like to mention Sonia. She belongs to a team of the "Butterfly Company". She is quite well understandable but she talks very quickly.
Second, I will talk about Pablo (Group: "The Business Area"). He has the representation taken by heart a lot and watching the notes. He doesn´t communicate correctly.
And finally, I will talk about Gloria (Group: "Richar´s Girls"). She was very nervous. I would encourage her to forget the audience and enjoy the representation.
I hope it will be enough!
Judith Ruano Vadillo
Hello Jesus!
ResponderEliminarI'm Jose Portillo, my team is "The Butterfly Company"
My comment about three persons of the class are: Sara Muñoz Rubio, Sergio Martin Corrales and finally Álvaro Santibáñez Sáez.
Sara Muñoz Rubio:
I think that she was nervous, but the theme she is going to talk is interesting.
Sergio Martin Corrales:
He is the principal voice of his team and his pronunciation is good.
Álvaro Santibáñez Sáez:
Álvaro was nervous, and he had to look to his paper but his theme is interesting
Hi Jesús i am Alejandro Silos from the heineken team.
ResponderEliminarMy first commentary is going to Rosana if the dream team, I think that she was inattentive but her ideas are goods. If she was more attentive, she will do a good presentation.
My second person is Álvaro Santibáñez, in my opinion Álvaro from the dream team has a very good pronuntiation.
Finally I'm going to talk about José from the butterfly company team.
I think that his presentation is very well because he speak slowly and seriously.
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ResponderEliminarHi Jesús!!I am Rosa Ana Rodriguez from "the dream team".
ResponderEliminarMy comment about three persons of the class are:
Sonia (The Butterfly Company):
Sonia does a good presentation because her pronunciation is very good and I believe that she is understandable.
Javier (Javier's Team):
I believe that Javier did a good work on having had value to appear only and to extract the group forward, in addition I think that he has a nice pronunciation.
Arantxa (The Business Area Team):
Arantxa does a good exhibition of her work, though I believe that great guide of the note and in some moments it becomes repetitive, but her work is very interesting and her good pronunciation.
Thanks and sorry for the delay regards!!!
Hi Jesüs!! I'm María del Mar Serrano and my group is "the dream team"
ResponderEliminarMy comments about three persons are:
- Javier (Javier's Team): His presentation is very good because he wasn't nervous and his pronunciation was nice. Althoug he read a lot of time the paper, he did a good work.
- Sonia (The Butterfly Company): She did a really good presentation.She had a good pronunciation and she is quite well understandable, but i think she talks very quickly from some people.
- Jose (The Butterfly Company):He had a good pronunciation but his presentation was very short, but in general he did a good work
This is my new individual direction :
marserrano90@blogspot.com
Hello Jesus!
ResponderEliminarI am Inma Rama Díaz of the group the Butterfly Company.
My commentary is of these three persons:
Javier: because he was very brave for gone out to exhibit alone and, though most of the presentation was read, I believe that the topic of his work is interesting and I am sure that the next time it was prepared better.
Rebeca: I believe that she have a good pronunciation and she especially marked well the points in her work and, though she was nervous (as all), she did it well.
And finally of Maria del Mar because I believe that she was who has the better pronunciation of all. She was nervous enough and she wasn´t stopping of move but she prepared well the topic and the constructed was good.
. I liked it.
Sorry but I haven´t internet in Cc.
Bye
Hello Jesus!! I´m Isabel.
ResponderEliminarMy new direction of the blog is:
http://isabelplazaolivas.blogspot.com/
Hi Jesus!!I´m Isabel Plaza Olivas,and my group is JOMES.
ResponderEliminarMy comments about 3 persons are:
In the first place,Rebeca that belong the team of Heineken.I think that she spoke very well in her presentation because the pronuntiation is good but she used sometime the memory.
In the second place,Javier that spoke in solitary. He was very valiant because he did the presentation en solitary, but he should pronuntiation better,however his presentation is good.
Finally,Inmaculada of the team "Richar´s girls".I think that she did a good presentation but she was very nervious(same everybody)and her nervious provocated that her pronuntiation was averange.
But in general I think that every presentations was good because this is we first presentation in public.
Bye.
Sorry for the delay!!!!
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